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1 sentence-convert passive-voice verbs to active-voice verbs.
"Programs were created by our board so that employess could become volunteers"
2 sentence-convert active-voice verbs to passive-voice verbs
"You must submit your resume and cover letter by e-mail"
3 and 4 sentences-remedy any dangling or misplaced modifiers, add subjects as needed
"using a number of creative search terms, the Web site was finally found";
"Ignoring the warning prompt on the screen, the computer was turned off resulting in the loss of data"
5 sentence-add transitional expressions to the sentence to improve the flow of ideas (coherence)
"We recognize that giving your time to important causes is just as important as giving your money.We've created several programs that make it easy and rewarding for our employees to get involved"
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Resume and cover letter should be submit by e-mail.-pravilno?
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| Чт, Дек 2, 2010 10:48am гражданка - 4906 d back | ↑↓ |
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resume and cover letter must be submitted by e-mail
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We've created several programs that make it easy and rewarding for our employees to get involved"
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